In The Holidays
In
the holidays I went on a picnic. I went with my mum, my dad and my big
sister. My big sister’s name is Christine. We went to Point England Park for our picnic.
First,
when we got to the park, we ate our food and we had cupcakes. My mum made our cupcakes. They tasted
minty. I liked them very much.
After
we had eaten my big sister and I went to play at the playground. I played on the big slide and then my big
sister took me to the swing. My sister
pushed me on the swing. I went up high.
Later
we went back to mum and dad to have a drink of orange Fanta. Then my sister and I went to the car to get
my teddy bear. Next we went back to the
playground. After we had played for a
while we had to go home. I had lots of
fun at our picnic.
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