I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms George.
Wednesday, 27 September 2017
Maui and the sun-by Giselle
Learning Intention: W.A.L - how to Blabberize .
Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I record my reading by using Blabberize.
Labels:
Blabberize,
Reading
Wednesday, 6 September 2017
Watching television does not make you clever - By Giselle
Learning Intention: we are learning to write persuasive writing.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can persuade someone to agree to my writing.
I think television does not make us clever
TV can have lots of violence. It has killing , shooting, murdering and whacking. Television has lots of commercials of junk food and sweets. It will make your eyes hurt because the screen is too bright. You not do any home work because you will just watch TV.
TV makes you sleepy because if you watch too much funny cartoons you don't want to go to bed. Television can make you very lazy, just sit there and watch your funny cartoons and don't any work. Television will not make you smart it will just make you dumb, lazy and brain-less.
Television is not good.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can persuade someone to agree to my writing.
I think television does not make us clever
TV can have lots of violence. It has killing , shooting, murdering and whacking. Television has lots of commercials of junk food and sweets. It will make your eyes hurt because the screen is too bright. You not do any home work because you will just watch TV.
TV makes you sleepy because if you watch too much funny cartoons you don't want to go to bed. Television can make you very lazy, just sit there and watch your funny cartoons and don't any work. Television will not make you smart it will just make you dumb, lazy and brain-less.
Television is not good.
Labels:
persuasive,
TV,
Writing
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