Watching television does not make you clever - By Giselle

Learning Intention: we are learning  to write persuasive writing.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can persuade someone to agree to my writing.

I think television does not make us clever 

TV can have lots of violence. It has killing , shooting, murdering and whacking. Television has lots of commercials of junk food and sweets. It will make your eyes hurt because the screen is too bright. You not do any home work because you will just watch TV.

TV makes you sleepy because if you watch too much funny cartoons you don't want to go to bed. Television can make you very lazy, just sit there and watch your funny cartoons and don't any work. Television will not make you smart it will just make you dumb, lazy and brain-less. 

Television is not good.