Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a narrative story using capital letters, full stops correctly in a paragraph form.
Lilly the Bear
A long Time ago lived a baby bear named Lilly with her parents Annabelle and Tom.
Lilly had big sharp teeth that could break a branch in half and had long fur, that almost covers her face. Lilly loved hunting for food but her parents wont let her because she was small.
Every night Lilly dreamed of being a big bear but her dream didn't come true. Lilly started to get sad, every morning,and every night, she was sad.
Her parents was wondering what was going on, so they went to her room and asked why she was sad. She told them that she wanted to be big like them. Lilly's parents laughed.
Lilly's parents said that she was still young and small. But when she gets older she will be a big bear like her parents.
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